Game softlocks after two or three choices. There's no background image up to that, and the UI is just Godot's support theme which does not set any kind of mood.
I don't think this is remotely ready to publish, even if you just want feedback.
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A prototype still needs to demonstrate some sort of quality and some sort of hook. Yours doesn't because it has zero visual components and I could only read like ten sentences before it stopped working. So you've utterly failed at both the "visual" and the "novel" part of visual novel. I genuinely can't tell if your "visual novel" is supposed to be ten sentences long (far too little to prove any sort of concept) or if your dialog system crapped out - either way, this leaves any player with the impression that you're incompetent and do not care about quality. At least add an end screen.
Even as a prototype, this needs to be better because this is just embarrassing.
You asked for feedback, I gave feedback on what little you have provided. If you don't like it, that's your problem. What the hell did you expect? There is nothing here to say anything positive or even value-neutral about.
And if you think what I did was give "style advice", you clearly didn't read my post.