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Nyarlathotep's Liegemen and the Sea Weed

A strange drug is spreading throughout Sunset Hills, and it's up to the lifeguards to track down its source! · By Night Noon Games | Michael Putlack

Typos, Errors, Mistakes, and other Oopsie-Daisies - Google Doc Sticky

A topic by Night Noon Games | Michael Putlack created 9 days ago Views: 32 Replies: 3
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Developer

Please let me know if you find anything wrong with the the text in the Google Doc of the adventure. I'd love to catch as many issues as possible before going to layout. I'll start a new thread for issues with the zine's PDF when that is released to catch things before going to print!

Background - first and second sentences - intentionally using marajuna instead of marijuana?


Important Figures

-Rian Dyer - last word pendent should be pendant

-Nyarlathotep’s Liegemen - says KHPL instead of KHPA


Scene 3 - dramatic question 2 - chase down the dealers 

- “The babetacular man and women…”, it's otherwise described as just one woman

-Chad Blaze & Brooke Green - says they won on “last moon's” episode. Should that be “last month’s”?

-check out the tvs - “It came From Beneath the Sea!”, came should be capitalized too, also I don't think that movie ends with an exclamation point 


Scene four description - pendent should be pendant


Scene 5 - entry 3 - are they trying to convince the couple they are one of the creatures? Or should they be trying to convince them that they're not a creature?


Scene six - bullet 3 - barricade the door - intentionally no roll required for this one?


What Happens Next - sixth bullet - pendent 

should be pendant

Developer

Awesome! Thanks so much for giving this all a read Jacob!

I'll get to updating these today. The two things that were intentional were "last moon's," the idea being that since it's Full Moon Monster Theatre, the episodes happen during every full moon. Maybe I need to make that clear somewhere. I also thought barricading the doors of the studio should not require a roll!

No problem Michael, looking like it'll be a blast to play!

I was assuming that was the case with Full Moon Monster Theatre, just "last moon" instead of "last full moon" was a bit unclear. I think saying last month also helps get the idea across due to that being the rough timeframe between full moons.