This game is really amazing! You did so well on it and I love it.
Quick critiques though, I know you said English wasn't your first language, so there are a few small spelling errors.
Strength has the 'T' after the 'G', and When Astarion bites the princess, it is Princess's neck, and when she wishes them to 'bathe' together, you forgot the 'E' at the end. and it's 'for the record' during the bath scene.
But it was amazing and I love this soooooooo much! Thank you so much for making it!