Not bad, you basically created good visuals with no art at all. Sound and the way u told the story was fitting too. For me the jump could have felt less "floaty". Solid entry though! (4,3,3,3,4)
Thank you! I have basic drawing skills (but I waste a lot of time on it and I don't have the time), but this was my first time trying to make music, thank you so much, I really appreciate it.
