compelling story with good art and music, but unfortunately suffers allot of issues.
the tone is all over the place, going from shitpost-esque jokes with the fried rice and the enemy encounters ect to serious poetic depressed monologues and back to comedy.
like the mouse sheep noises are genuinely funny! but please go for something more serious for the serious scenes!
the combat too is so bad and unimportat that it really should be cut. good turn based combat takes allot of work and this game doesn't need it nor the effort it would require to make good.
it could also serve to be a bit more terse in its writing, espically with the blackscrene monologues. they are well written, but there's to many of them and they are each to long.
I'm exited for what you make in the future