Thank you!!! Dialogue is one of the first things I notice, and it means so much you felt it was natural. If nothing else, I want the dialogue to be good. I plan to have 4-5 acts, depending on how much I can fit per act! You mentioned being shocked, and now I'm curious. If you feel like sharing, I'd love to hear!
Lol, the pointy irises ARE pretty evil! I wanted something in the design to show they're both capable of being sinister. I've also played games or watched shows where the art was NOT my style, but later got attached, so that's totally real! To me, Benji feels realistic creepy and Ellis more classic horror creepy. It's the "choose your own creep" show lol. Thanks again, and stay tuned!