I felt like the ending could have used a bit more buildup. It felt rather quick, with a lot of stuff happening really quickly without giving time for it to fully settle in. I think some minor hijinks before the main event would have really improved things, like maybe setting up the fair, or helping the EAC move Jen. Maybe with the credits showing where the others ended up, something like that.
However, that is the *only* real critisim I have for this game. It was incredibly funny, erotic, and shockingly in depth both story and setting wise. I was completely hooked, and had fallen in love with all of the characters. Some moments actually had me teared up, especially with Wires. Fantastic representation all throughout, great art, and top-tier writing. Came for the fetish content, stayed for the story. I hope we see some bonus content for Apocalypse XL, but if not, I wish you luck on your next venture.