Its a very interesting concept and one that I can see be expanded upon - for example, the theme of the game (in my eyes) seems to be about labels and the way people put them onto others. The protagonist has a label put on her as the quiet one, which she accepts. Then, she sees a physical manifestation of those labels onto other people - but whats interesting is that those labels are the ones she made, so she's sort of repeating the same thing others do to her, but is able to see them and manipulate them. It made me wonder if the protagonist is as insightful as she is, or if she too is just participating in a cycle of labeling others and putting them in a box. I think this is slightly touched upon in the story but I do like how it goes in general and would be intrigued to see more. The art is really nice too, especially with the month long deadline. Although I would have liked to see the label halos in game too! If you decide to continue this, that'll be really cool! It's a neat twist on the life is strange eqsue power system.