This was really good!
I liked the concept and I liked the restraint in scope, focusing on a decently small pool of characters, which allowed them to be more unique and have their stories more present in the mind of the reader. I felt like the systems were really good too (Pressure, Label changing) and just needed expanded upon (which I really believe is possible if you simply had more time!)
I found the writing to also be really good, capturing the concept of an outside observer really well (personally I felt like the main character's writing was on par/relatively the same level as the writing of the narrator character in The Great Gatsby), especially with the language techniques for general emphasis in the characters thoughts.
One neat detail I really liked was the fact I could physically like the posts from Jades social media around the start, It probably didn't change anything but I just thought it was cool.
Great work!