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This is my favorite IF. My only complaint is that I can’t play the entire game start to finish.

First of all, I rarely listen to in game soundscapes or play WIP IFs more than once. This, however, I’ve played SEVERAL times, and each time with the sound on. It’s so immersive! The prose is lush and evocative. And the characters? Oh my god.

I know we’re supposed to hate Umyra but I do not care that she is manipulating Lenity and neither does Lenity (not JUST because she’s smitten with her! There are other reasons). While the options to snark and fight back are fun, playing the Eternal Optimist against Umyra (and slowly gaining her affection?? hello?? miss ma’am??? i saw that!!) has been my favorite dynamic thus far.

Aikani and the guard are fascinating, too. Both, when given the option, choose to be kind (sometimes to their detriment). Seeing the little blink and you’ll miss it moments solidifies the power structure and lends credence to the fact that these are people with their own, separate agendas without making Umyra seem ineffectual, which is a delicate balancing act in courtly settings.

And also Z??? In the dream??? Z, babe, why did you do that?

I’m looking forward to the tragic slow burn between Lenity and Umyra where they never admit their feelings for one another and then the former dies in a battle she could never hope to win 💖Or, rather, that’s what I would say if she didn’t strike a bargain with another, different being of immense and ancient power. We’ll see how that goes for her in the eleventh hour. There’s so many dots to connect within the plot; I’m curious to see if the protagonist catches on sooner rather than later and if my theory with regards to reflections are correct.

Anyway, this was perhaps too long, but letting you know exactly how much I liked this game and why felt like the least I could do after you’ve worked so hard. Thank you for making it.

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Your FAVOURITE IF?! In this vast realm of interactive fiction? ⸜(˶˃ ᵕ ˂˶)⸝ And you've played it multiple times with the audio?!

I didn't think I could be any happier after finally releasing Chapter 2 into the wild, but you've definitely proved me wrong. Please don't apologise for the long comment, it was heartwarming to read and I'll do my best to give it the response it deserves! Thank you so much for giving this demo a chance, even in its unfinished state!

Who said you're supposed to hate Umyra? Certainly not me! Your Lenity is more than welcome to fall for a manipulator's manipulations... at risk of a Shakespearean Tragedy, of course. I've been truthfully telling players not to worry overmuch about affection stats right now - she's going to hate the protagonist only slightly less (at best) for a few chapters - but certain words and actions do make a favourable impression, even early on. You seem to have noticed, lol!

There’s so many dots to connect within the plot; I’m curious to see if the protagonist catches on sooner rather than later and if my theory with regards to reflections are correct.

Many, many dots indeed! I'd give you a hint, but I'm afraid I signed a binding non-disclosure agreement with the fey...

Make no mistake, it is deeply gratifying that players are enjoying the central relationship between MC and the twins; that said, your notes on the servant and the guard were so special to read. They both have a history apart from and with Umyra, and neither of them would dare to directly cross her. But as you mentioned, they are both willing to step to her over some things... so  knowing that this unspoken history was present in the world as you played is everything. ♡

And also Z??? In the dream??? Z, babe, why did you do that?

You are the first person to mention that dream about Z! No comment on that, though... ahaha.

My only complaint is that I can’t play the entire game start to finish.

I'm doing my best to remedy that, I promise!

Chapter 3 is in-progress.

~ Effie