The art is excellent and the fishing technique is enjoyable. You excelled in the dialogue; it lacks a bit of horror, but it's still good.
Viewing post in The Converted jam comments
Thank you so much. Yeah, I felt it lacked horror too to be honest. I went for a conceptual horror style where just the very idea of something was scary enough to be horror. I was inspired by Tusk (a movie I absolutely hate for how uncomfortable it makes me), and the book / game, I Have No Mouth, And I Must Scream. I don't think I hid the 'secret' of what was going on well enough. The ending was meant to be a REVEAL OF THE TRUTH... but I think most players guessed what was going on right away. I also don't think I executed the whole 'body horror' concept near well enough.
But anyway, I REALLY appreciate you playing my game and your feedback too! THANK YOU.