Well first I wish you the best with your surgery. I really pray everything goes well for you. You made an effort and you were not afraid to submit your progress either, and to me, that alone is a huge accomplishment. I think the way you present the horror premise and sitatuion is EXTREMELY well done. I mean EXTREMELY too. Simple and small details like how the dialogue is displayed (the fading effect works well), and the sound design was really good in the beginning. So great job with that.