Hey Thanks for the feedback!
Page 5 now has high res.
19-23 was filler and all new layout and art was finished yesterday.
62 woman’s jaw. I didn’t see it until you pointed it out. I added lines to signify it is indeed not a beard lol.
Fonts & layout have been updated a lot since the free preview. Hopefully better and still not distracting from art.
As of yesterday all page layout is “done”. Now time for a editing then send it to an actual editor :)
Again - thank you for the input. I’m going to see if I can get that map better (or find a map maker if I can).
- Dan