I've played the latest build from patreon and unfortunately I don't think your game is very good. The art and story are interesting, but gameplay-wise it's bad. Enemies are boring and too easy to fight, dodge roll is useless since just moving away from the attack is faster than the roll, and you can just run past the opponents towards your destination. I think that enemies need to attack much faster and stronger and grab you when you try to get past them without rolling or jumping above, and there need to be H-events and scenes available when they do that, without the need to lose the fight completely to watch anything.
Boss fights are ok, the rest of the game is what troubles me.