With music this energetic, there needs to be some movement on screen to match the energy. At least have some animated transitions, some moving text instead of just static slides, some footage of someone doing something in your game.
But honestly, if your game does not have any exciting stuff you can show off in a trailer (which is fine - a lot of genres just don't go for visual bling), I'm not sure if making a trailer is a worthwhile use of your time. Even if you really want to market on YouTube, you could post a quick walkthrough of the game mechanics with voice-over, or some vlogs about your dev process instead.