I want to start by saying that this is one of the best stories I’ve ever read. The writing is amazing, you’ve definitely grown as a writer from you previous works. You keep the reader hooked so deeply && wanting more. I love that.
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Minor spoilers?
I do have a few small criticisms, most is very minor nothing like bad just to expand on audiences && such. I think the character customization could have an added feature of inputting your own pronouns for example. I also wanted to point out the one time you use the word “narcissist” to describe a character negatively. Narcissism is actually a personality disorder && not a person who is inherently bad. NPD has a lot of stigma around it of people classifying anyone with his disorder abusive when that’s not the case [i.e. similar to stigma around people who experience psychosis]. I just wanted to say maybe change that small bit of wording to avoid feeding the stigma. I know it’s not a widely spread thing so I just wanted to inform!
Also I really hope there’s polyamory I love these characters so much!! Van was a wonderful surprise being schizophrenic btw :D I’m someone who experiences psychosis && possibly schizospec so!! Exciting to see people like me being included :3