I like your artstyle. However I'm curious why Gwen has to be a kid that ages herself up with magic when she could just be an adult from the start.
I planned to make her an adult from the start, but I needed a justification for why she was an adult while still wearing her childhood outfit (her outfit and hairstyle from Ben 10 are the most iconic and beloved by fans).
So I simply decided that at the beginning she wouldn’t be an adult yet, but all the dialogue and actions would remain within appropriate boundaries until she becomes an adult.
In any case, at the start of the game it will always say, “All characters are over 18 years old,” so it’s just brief context for the demo.
OK. I hope I haven't made trouble for you. I still really like your artstyle and would have played the updates to the game regardless of if you changed the beginning. I asked more out of confusion as to why the game started like that rather then out of not liking the demo. Its not like anything happens to Gwen while she is underaged.
Still if you think changing the demo will allow you to make the best possible version of the game, I say go for it.