Thank you !
It's a relief to hear that you found the presentation compelling. I am very much a novice, VN-wise, and this being my first jam, I often feared that my inexperience in matters of code and drawing would hinder my writing.
I really should have answered you much earlier, but, given that I am currently going into the making of chapter 2 might I ask what specific parts about the presentation worked or fell flat?
...as for the relationship part of your comment, I can only wish you luck in that domain. This tale was primarily inspired by my fears, as well as some of the experiences I went through.
It brings me joy to know that my story can help other reflect on their own life, and that they might feel... less alone when facing certain hardships.
...I imagine that the primary point is to try and not lose oneself in the play, to be faithful to your boundaries, limits, to know when to safeword... and that you cannot fix everything. Especially with BDSM.
May you find your way.