First off, great story, great graphics, lots of great humour, and very nice H Scenes. Seriously, Well done! My only gripe is that MC most times is a self-centered asshat that is mostly clueless about women but grasps magic like it's second nature. Kind of an interesting split. Though I am only around 6 hours in, I hope he finally realizes his shortcomings and pulls his head out of his rectum. (can you tell I am getting into the story?) One question, what's up with everyone's eyes glowing? It's very striking. Oh, and Miya is best gal!
Story: 5/5 Art: 5/5 H Scenes: 5/5
Overall: 5.0 stars Well done @InvaderGary