ok. so. i liked this a lot and if you rated it bad because of the intro you should go back and give this another chance. BUT.
your intro is grating and not in the good way. up til 0:26 this song is fuckin unlistenable. you could cut that down by like 2/3s and still get the same effect and you could get rid of it 100% and have a damn good song. maybe grab a sample quote from some asshole talkin about how greed is good or somethin instead.
i stuck with it and im glad i did because AFTER THAT its not bad. your bassline is sick af and i like the drum fills youve got goin on. i like the shit you have goin on with the synth and the drums at the 2:00 mark.
the guitar shit yr doin at 2:18 is very persona 3 and i like it a lot. same with the synths at like 2:45. idk what it is about it it just has persona vibes to me.
i can tell this was supposed to have lyrics - your lead is definitely missing. if you want to keep workin on this, put the lyrics in there, and seriously man get rid of that intro.