ok im definitely hearin the mick gordon in here. definitely sounds 2 rip and tear until it is done. i could believe you used a lawnmower on a colander or somethin like mick does
yr way too hard on yrself about the guitar. you have fucked up that guitar so good oh my god. at like 2:56 holy shit that is fuckin SICK as HELL and the rhythm guitar is good the whole fuckin way through. some of the guitar playin almost reminds me of smt 3. its so fuckin good.
i really like the decrescendo at 1:35 and the sizzly synths (?) right after. and the build at like 3:25 + the mechanical scream. holy shit. holy fucking shit.
this is an easy 5/5 for me. no notes. keep doin what yr doin.