Ill try keep this shirt and concise as otherwise id write a lot.
1. Rin? The sister, is easily rhe best character and I like her scenes and story the most. That being said, there's. Significant fault I've noticed. That being introspection. We dont see any of it,if she has any. Which at this point is making her character feel.a bit generic porn gamey. As in, she went from being normal and not too into pervy stuff, to suddenly doing you know what as i donnt wanna spoil people. Its quite the jump and although we r told its for x and x reason in a sentencee. It would be very helpful to kinda get some scenes from her viewpoint just to see her actually considering things and what thoughts she has that make her do this or that. Kinda giving her character bit more life. Vague examples.would be during the foto submission to that group, her sudden choice to join that platform, etc. I day all this as a big fan of game and mostly her. Hopefully u see this and consider it its ur game but this just my thoughts as player of it.
Number 2. I really like how this game is set up, with the looks/app/just function. Would yu consider making utube videos of tutorials? As I been really wanting to try make one of my own. Or if dont mind a more direct instructions like discord or sumthing. As I've tried to search for tutorials but never found any. Thank you .