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FEEDBACK ON PLOT WANTED for VN with 'philosophical' meanings: expand it or leave it?

A topic by Button Cupcake created 11 days ago Views: 64 Replies: 4
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Hey all! So I made a multi-ending VN: https://buttoncupcake.itch.io/0808-2018-a 

It's a story with a deeper meaning: read this walkthrough (with SPOILERS) for the meaning.

I would like your opinions as players/readers on whether you think it's good as it is or there are more story events you think I could add to make the meaning more complete.

I initially planned to expand the demo from the DEMO SPECIAL ENDING, but if you have other views about this, feel free to let me know!

No need for complex feedback, just simple thoughts about what more you expect (if applicable).

DISCLOSURE: This work is part of school projects to leverage GenAI for storytelling. The story text and interface/cinematic design are entirely human-made. Only the visuals and some sounds are from AI (Stable Diffusion mainly).

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just what I needed to play right now

just achieve 2 different endings 

i will try to achieve all 6 endings and come back to give a better feedback

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OMG thank you so much! I thought this thread was dead lol

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I was finally able to achieve all 6 endings! I loved the game, the premise, everything...

I believe the DEMO SPECIAL ENDING is a good ending, but if you feel you have more to tell us... Follow your heart! (Yeah, sorry, that's not the help you wanted)

But, I'm a chicken, so I got really scared the first time the Angry Person appearead, it felt like a jumpscare to me.

Glad you love it! And I think that's a helpful answer, no worries! Hope you're fine now, from the Angry Person XD