Aaa, this is so cool :D
More than did it justice, I'd say! Great adaption of the Noah Caldwell-Gervais structure. This is a really thoughtful and interesting essay, exploring all the major themes - including the one of plurality, which I promise really did just kind of... show up. It wasn't planned, just sci-fi being sci-fi.
It's honestly incredible to see someone doing such a close read of my silly little space lizard game. This contains very useful feedback, yes yes. It's certainly true that Lizard Game can be at odds with itself - I decided early on that I'd rather make an interesting mess than something boring but streamlined. So, I'm happy that the story came together as well as it did.
I'd definitely encourage you to share this one around, perhaps put it on YouTube if you end up being comfortable with that at all. This is honestly great as a video essay, let alone a first ever video essay. Apart from that, I'd love to show it to some people myself, if you're comfortable with that.