That was great! Gotta hand it to Joe Red Shirt, he's a man of focus in the midst of...well...everything. Come alien invasion or tumbleweed to the face, they were entirely unflinchable. Terribly slow draw though ;)
The town and lighting was very pretty, which really helped the ambiance. I did notice that after drawing or zooming the camera just started drifting down to the bottom right. I would've liked it more if the camera swayed (like in a figure 8 pattern) instead, if the drift was to throw off your aim. I enjoyed everything else though. Also props for adding a tutorial!