For a first time making a narrative experience, this was actually, pretty great!
I like pretty much everything about the plot. How you made a bunch of little stories, showing the enshitification from different perspectives. All of the stories felt warm and human. Nothing was over the top. Just a bunch of different people unknowingly sharing the experience of being boned by a global corporation.
It's difficult to judge the graphics and audio in a game like this. The game looks and sounds like an operating system. Which was the point.
The theme was used well. Maybe it could be pushed a bit more. Like- do you save you conspiracy research or photos pre-divorce? Then again- maybe it would take away from the atmosphere?
Over all- this was a very atmospheric experience in a way I didn't expect from this theme. Looking forward to seeing more narrative stuff from you!