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I really enjoyed my time in the Demo. The representation of the dull office life is on point, the Artwork is good, but especially great with the ghost - big thumbs up. That man.. oh boy. I'm happy to have him on my screen at any time. ♥ Oh and one more thing; The option after seeing an ending, to go back to the previous choice is so good. Thank you for that!

I have two critiques though: I played the male (he / him) mc and was.. irritated by the dialoge sometimes. I was called "girl, ..." by Clara at some point, then in the buying pjama scene I apparently bought a lace bra and string panties (?? xd). Not that I couldn't wear that, but I would like.. maybe the option of different clothing.
2nd: In the playthrough where I made appreciative choices towards the ghost, we act like we are obsessing or even stalking him (even though we know nothing about him). The Ghost is stalking us, invading our space and we are apparently so socialy starved that we like it, so why are acting like we are the issue? I really dont get it D:

MouseBeanRay1 day ago(+1)

Hi Jin, thank you for playing!! Yeah, I’ve seen this option to go back in one of the games I played and found it super convenient, so I tried to implement it in my game as well. Thank you for noticing ♡

About the “girl” thing, sorry for breaking the immersion. I’ll fix it in the coming update soon, missed that one when checking. Thank you for pointing it out! As for the clothing, I thought it would look great on the male MC as well, but I’m open to suggestions. What type of seductive set would you prefer for the male MC?

So, mild SPOILER ALERT

the MC has a certain past that’s briefly mentioned in one of the endings, but it will be explored in detail later in the story. That past makes them… sorta unstable? So they do indeed have an issue. I wanted to hint at it without disclosing too much in the demo ( ≖‿ ≖ ) hehe

Jin20 hours ago

Thank you for the reply, it really helped me to understand your vision! ♥

One or two suggestions would be simply a nude option (I mean, nothing screams seduction like having nothing on... right?) or a pjama that has transparent features. Like a white top, where the back is fully covering but in the front you can see through the material. Same goes for the underwear, where f.e. the side and maybe the behind are more or less transparent. That could be an Idea, but I want to remind you that not everything has to be for everyone. If you like the clothing option, keep it. :D I was happy with the game nonetheless!

About Spoiler:

that. explains. a. lot! I have small suggestion here without changing any text: Maybe implement a small "frizzle" effect everytime the mc has a moment of being unstable. You know, like a broken tv? I feel like that could amplify that effect and maybe makes it less confusing as in "why are we reacting that way" and rather "oh.. so I'm not so stable..".

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