I absolutely love the Noah's Ark Ending! Truly beautiful. I love how you incorporated Noah's Ark in the dialogue, it made us feel closer to Elijah and his faith, perhaps our own faith as well. I really appreciate the insight into addiction and over-reliance on technology, it helps with this era of technology and how isolated people can feel. One of my favorite parts of this vn is definitely how unsettling it makes me feel when hearing about the "outside world"/the reality of the world Elijah, and us, are in. Especially about the normalizing of "delivering" daily essentials by drones n etc due to the lethal air quality and the idea of a digital world where all of our real bodies just stay asleep, like it gives me a nasty taste in my tongue,its like the government's lowkey thinking "Oh we ruined our real world so lets just abandon it and build another world but in digital!", very very unsettling, which made me feel even more immersed! Spectacular job overall ^^