for the new version the order homeland doesn't have it's story, in the homelands of the eschaton section that is
Amazing catch! I am clearly in need of an editor.
Here is a cleaner version with a few other changes. I just updated a cleaner version with a few more changes. I'm starting to wonder if I shouldn't just create a web version of it (but that would be crazy, right?).
Anyway, thanks for your sharp eye! Let me know how you like the game so far and if you'd be interested in playtesting at any point.