**The next review has some slight spoilers from the story, so please play the game before reading this**
Okay, I'm just going to be frank here. This game is one of the best games I've ever played. The captivating story, the (and I can't stress this enough) amazingly written characters and the provocative scenes interwine together in a way I didn't think it was even possible.
When you enter the game for the first time (or at least in my case), you expect this to be the typical AVN with just lewd stuff happening. But you're quickly proven wrong when Lucy's story begins to unfold. The emotional background story starts making you cling to the screen reading every word with every hint of emotion you can. And when you're starting to settle down then BANG! You get thrown off balance with Victoria's story. You're quickly trapped in an inescapable whirlpool of characters and stories that makes you stare at the screen even harder. And if that wasn't enough, the Founding Families thing starts to develop, making the game even more difficult to leave. All this good narrative with the slice of life moments, comedy and the sad parts makes the story simply perfect, achieving what I like to think as the perfect balance between happy, sad and action.
Ah and the music choice is really good. It really suits the game and makes it far better than it would have been without music.
And I emphasized this at the beggining, but I really love the character story so far. Specifically Sarah's, Cat's and Hannah's (those three are best girls, with Vicky close behind, without discussion).
But although I love the game in its current state, I do have some things to say. To agree with Victoria here: the MC is getting stretched too thin. I think some girls are starting to naturaly fall into the background when the new ones start taking some screen. For example: Lucy (who's already fallen out of my grace) and Victoria (who's story I really really like so please give her more screentime and, specially, more character development, she's starting to be monotonous and a bit predictable). And it's not because of bad writting, the core idea of having 10 girls seems too much for there to be enough character development (apart from the inicial "pre-girlfriend" one) for all of them. I fear that the moment they become girlfriends they just "die" and stay irrelevant for the rest of the story. I really miss old Vicky, her new self is less teasing and playful and Cat is starting to replace her. And I don't want the same to happen to any of the other girls (specially Sarah).
That being said, and seeing how far you've made it, I truly trust you and, therefore, your vision for the game. So I mantain my faith that you will be able to handle well the situation. So please don't disapoint me, ok? (just joking, but my hopes really are high for this story).
And lastly, I just want to say thank you Cosy Creator. Thank you for making this a reality, thank you for your efforts, and thank you for not letting this die like so many projects I've loved but that have been ditched aside. Thank you.
PS: Sorry if any of this sounds unnatural, English is not my first language so I hope the message gets through.