Hey! Just letting you know there's a typo on Day 1: "Jim gets up and holds out a hand to take my empty mug from you too. Trying to be a gracious host to you."
I'm so interested to see more of this project. The storytelling, art, and atmosphere are a real treat (I really like how you've drawn the snowy trees and animated the snow to change directions! The music/sound effects are also unintrusive while aiding immersion).