So glad the feedback was appreciated and this made you giggly happy! ;w; Hypnosis is one of my favourite kinks, so it’s super dear to me to that I could give you some meaningful feedback/chat about it a bit!
I think I can feel the places where those expansions could be done, which is probably why that’s so noticeable on a replay. Think the nature of a jam is inevitably running out of time for stuff like that though, hah!