I'm so happy that you came back to this one, I've always loved the level of rage I get from this MC and am glad that I still can!
I think your writing has definitely improved, but I absolutely LOVE the way you wrote the children's speaking, like they're actually children. I love that my responses as a young child are immature, it's great! I can hear a squeaky little voice behind them!
I'm just so glad you're returning to this, I'm so excited for more updates. Welcome back!!