I really loved this! The double entendre of the setup is so delightful; I definitely had a few moments of “Wait- wait-”. The minimal presentation really plays to the fiction’s strengths, and the typing was SO good. And the story! Super cute, with a genuine loving sweetness at the end - I wasn’t expecting it to end on such a feel-good note with the warnings at the beginning, but I got my warm and fuzzies from it all the same.
This really feels like a complete, polished project!