So far i've gone through Moonlight Protocol, Daddy was a Killer, and Lost to Time - I'm loving everything you have set up for now but by far Lost to Time is the most interesting to me!
With Moonlight Protocol being the first story I read, it definitely left a strong impression. Having the whole loading screen and code was so cool and fun. I was confused at first when it said "Downloading" but I didn't know I was in for such a cool intro! As for the story? The concept of a dystopian world is always cool. I don't doubt your writing abilities in setting it in motion. But it definitely tapered off into the end in a kinda less interesting way. Poor Auto-driver though.
I loved the twist in Daddy was a Killer and it definitely has a set up for a heart wrenching story. Nothing like a really fun detective story to get one excited! One thing I like a whole lot from this compared to Moonlight Protocol was the MC feature customization embedded into the dialogue. It was a nice way to bypass the dropdown menus being disruptive to the flow of the story.
Although my notes on the prior stories are a little lacking as of writing (I had played them before going to bed), Lost to Time had given me such a good thrill that I decided to write this comment in the first place!
To me, Lost to Time has the most interesting potential for a cool plotline.
One of the things I strongly enjoyed while going through God-Cursed was the world-building. I remember the wolf temple fondly, Nathaniel(?) and his charmingly quirky self + business, Rundis' magic, and the very well done writing of MC's youth, leading up to the current events of the IF. I even cried for MC!
With your impeccable writing and attention to detail, it would be wonderful to see this title be polished! Just the idea of being part of the Space Cops, learning about the version of Earth/Humans in this world with Mary, Maybe wooing Phthalo-
Anyways! I personally wouldn't be upset with which ever samples become the next project - I'm more than happy just to see the worlds you come up with!
In hindsight, I should've taken better notes :kekw: sorry if this wasn't lucrative.