This looked and felt good in the weirdest ways. The music was perfect and the forebodding sensation that creeps through the writing is really good. I always felt like I was about to make a mistake, which is a really good take on pup headspace and worked super well with mechsploitation (we have like three of them in the jam and all in different flavours, it's great).
The ending cut to menu was a bit too abrupt but the final moving shot was super good. The vignette is excellent.