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Nice casting and art with a simple and straightforward game loop that would be easy to add content to later, the potential is quite visible. I enjoyed the income speed, it didn't leave me waiting without anything to do.
However, I disliked the writing. It was tedious and repetitive while using a lot of hentai and netizen vocabulary (NTR, v-card, butt fiend etc) and almost never describing things by their name (I cheered the first time I read "ass" instead of tunnel or wall or backdoor and the rest, it was with Marcy I think).
Most tenants having wives or girlfriend or sisters and especially the first saying that she doesn't normally like boys felt like lesbian fetichisation but not in a way I could appreciate, especially with sex being a sequence of gift leading to instant desire, kissing followed by penetration, cumming, and brutal end (for the one exception where you eat her up before penetration, the text graciously informs you that the "real fun" is about to start when you switch to PIV, which I really disliked: it was dismissive of oral sex and contrasted poorly with the blowjob scene that is considered to be a valid, entire sequence).

Overall I think this needs more variety in the writing and a bigger effort to convey sex as something experiential and varied rather than a series of awkward uses of the words sticky and lust. I'd recommend reading erotica (and not porn) to get a wider perspective of what you could write, because the will is clearly there to do a variety of things: this is a game with plenty of content and with nice sprites that conveyed the sizes, positions and action shots very well, I believe it mostly needs sexier sex.