Like the others playing before looking at your walkthrough was quite difficult since the game doesn't follow usual parser logic (especially the ability to check previous text or interactible objects and folks being pointed out by caps or bold or any other sign - check out Intwined Dreams, they did a great job at structuring a classic IF). I'd recommend playing or watching more of the genre you're working with in the future, because players have mental models and expectations that will project on the game depending on its.
This aside, it was fun, with straightforward writing. It was easy to get lost both in text and in space (took me a while to realise there wasn't a hub per se). The kink was ok, I would have liked the characters to have more lines and more depth, it felt a bit like being pushed from one requirement to the next. Still, a solid and entire piece for a gamejam!
Edit: kudos for making me spam "FUCK CYRUS" at the receptionist on my first playthrough since I got super stuck