What a wonderfully moody, unnerving world you've created. It's really refreshing to have such a passive tone in such a cataclysmic genre, and being caught in between cosmic-level helplessness and the adventure-game genre's need to act is a really fascinating mix!
I really hope you continue to develop this game. You're clearly a great world and character builder, and I think if you can iron out the bugs, make the interface a bit more responsive, and hold the player's hand a little less, this will be an incredible experience!
And good luck at MAGS! You should make a game page for this on the forums so more people can see it!