I noticed a drastic change in how Chapter 10 is written. The dialogues feel more “conversational,” with some added slang. It seems to me like it was polished with AI. I don’t exactly know how to describe it, but at times the change in dialogue works fine; other times, it feels somewhat off and over the top — and it kind of ruins the fluidity of the story. I also find the use of heavier English terms a little unnecessary. And… poor Yuka. You did her bad here.