The game in itself has a lot of potentional and I would love to see where this story goes! But there are some mistakes that I caught, like repeating phrases, sentences that don't really make sense, and while using MC with he/him pronouns, he's referenced as a queen twice, if I remember right.
Overall, I enjoyed myself, as an writer myself - I have a small advice, dont rush yourself, it really sucks out the joy out of creating when you have a bunch of people asking when will another update come out/if you can make an app of the vn/rushing you/ecr - plan ahead for the story and stick to the plan you made, even if the audience wants something diffrend than what you want to make
The animations and art are gorgeous, especially how smooth they are. The designs of the puppets are unique, and I can't wait to see the rest of the members of the kingdom.
Take care, dear!<3