I think you did really well with this.
The pace is much better than most VNs I've been reading lately, while most are pretty long winded IMO, I think this one could afford to take a bit more of its time. The art is fun, and despite the stories circumstances it makes the game feel kinda comfy. The characters are likable and their minds are distinct as well.
It's a good read :)
Thank you for the kind words! It really means a lot =)
The first part of the third chapter, which is certainly longer than the first two (and thus the need to divide it), will be released soon. We are having a small delay, since we are working on something related to Blue Souls that will be announced soon, but both should be released this month. Hope you stick around for them!
