The sheer amount of backgrounds in this is bananas, felt like there was a scene change almost every couple lines which is very ambitious and pulls off a sense of space pretty well (though unfortunately also draws into focus the kind of tension of an exhibition kink without a potential audience, but not in a bad way tbh, like it feels kind of safe if exhibition is something that makes you anxious). I do like that the relationship between the two main characters can kind of range from restrained lifestyle dom/sub dynamic to something more cartoonishly horny depending on your choices? That range was just kind of nice.
Would like more outfits if this ever gets picked up again! Or a bit more about who these characters are outside of the kink space because it did get a little blurry whether this was just kind of how they are of if they were playing roles. I know the ellipses were supposed to be representative of idle conversation but i would have actually liked to read the conversations even if it wasn't horny or kink-related-- especially in a thing like this where the routine of the kink and exposure to it is ballooned to the point of normalcy? Idk if that makes sense but yeah I liked this one, it was cute!