Nice little game. Loved the visuals and the blending from slow narrative side scroller to platformer. I liked how you played with nighttime/daytime lighting too.
The platformer controls are a bit rough, barely clipping a tile and losing all momentum felt bad especially in that one section where you have to double jump under obstacles hanging from the ceiling. That was almost rage-game like which didn't fit the rest of the game in terms of difficulty.
The character's monologue and the story in general felt a bit improvised and uninspired. I think it would've worked better if they were talking to an NPC or something instead of just describing their confusion and what they see.
Still a great entry, especially for something made on your own in just a week!