I've updated my review - I hope you feel that the new version addresses your points. For the record, since you specifically asked me to say this, I do think this game is in the bottom 40% of 5e products, but it seemed harsh to write that exact phrase on a review for something that was partially contributed to by a six-year-old and which is clearly a labour of love.
yeah, it does feel a bit harsh, actually. If you honestly think it is that bad I'd be happy to give you your money back. But because you purchased it along with over 1000 other games as part of a bundle, I just hope that one of those games was worth your $5. I don't really understand why someone would put up poor reviews for games they obtained as part of a charity bundle. Did you do this for each of the 1000 games in there? I honestly don't understand how this is helping any part of the hobby, tbh.
I am working through reviewing all of the TTRPGs from the bundle, yes. As for the other games, I will be reviewing the ones in genres that I am interested in. The hope is that reviews help people to whittle down the items they might wish to play from the bundle, as 1000+ items is a lot to choose from and many people have limited time to spend trying them out.
I could see the value in perhaps highlighting some games that are particularly good at being inclusive and addressing identity issues that you care about. In fact, I would find value in a comment that said the game could be better at issues related to identity.
But I don't see the point in commenting on something that isn't really your thing, especially because your edited comment gives a completely different read on things than your original comment. I think in the future if you want to say something about someone's game that feels "harsh," maybe the best thing is to listen to your instincts and just not bother with reviewing it at all. I think your followers will get the message.
My gaming company is currently on hiatus, so it's not a big deal to me. But a lot of game designers put a lot of themselves into what they do and could take this kind of message very personally. Please be considerate of that as you continue with your reviews.