First of all, you finished a game that looks great overall — and achieving that in just 7 days is impressive. Great job!
Things I liked:
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The world you created and the art style are very beautiful — you can tell a lot of work went into them.
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The core mechanic feels relatively original and is well implemented. I think it has a lot of potential if you continue developing it.
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The music and SFX do their job well and fit nicely with the experience.
Constructive Feedback:
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I think the main issue right now is the player movement script. It feels a bit difficult to control. The first thing I would suggest is adding a dynamic jump, where the jump height depends on how long the jump button is pressed.
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I would also review the collision system, especially with the boxes. When the player stands next to them and jumps, they sometimes get stuck. You might want to adjust the box colliders or implement some form of corner correction to make movement feel smoother and more polished.