Out of all the VNs I played so far this has the most unique idea of the plot I have ever seen. On top of that I LOVED character design in this - most of them were vibrant unique demi-humans and I loved to see it. Also the powers and plot itself apparently were very thoroughly thought out.
There are only two things I directly didnt like about this game. Ill start with the easy one - I dont like that I am given a choice and the choice itself tells me that this choice leads to sex scene. Big nono nobody is gonna click the other thing ever. Remove that please!
Second is a bit more of a constructive criticism. About sex scenes itself. I noticed as I went deeper into the game you improved them and they felt more engaging. However generally speaking most of your NSFW scenes were just a 1-2 second gif where you later speed it up. If you make the gif longer lets say 15-30 seconds depending how much you like it will become harder for our brains to see the repetition. Each character movement will feel more authentic and less automated. Small differences in face, legs arms, gestures can make big result in the overall gif.
Overall for me this game was very good A tier definitely looking forward to next update. If you make these changes it would even become S tier for me.
Speaking of updates - where can I watch your next patch progress?