First of all, you finished a game that looks great overall — and achieving that in just 7 days is impressive. Great job, guys.
Things I liked:
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The art style and character concepts are strong. With additional polish, I believe the game could quickly reach a commercial level.
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It’s clear that you put solid work into the dialogues and the theme. I especially liked the ending and its twist.
Constructive Feedback:
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The gameplay feels somewhat simple at the moment. I would consider revisiting the core game design to make it more engaging — perhaps by introducing a puzzle mechanic or another layer of challenge.
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I like the main character’s running animation; however, it feels slightly odd when it loops from the last frame back to the first. I’m not entirely sure what causes it, but it may be worth reviewing the animation transition.
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I would also check the size of the dialogue boxes, as they sometimes feel too small for the amount of text displayed.