Hey, great job on completing the game! I liked how tongue-in-cheek and just random some of the humor is (idk why but I died laughing when I saw "oh my god what was that"). Some feedback:
The platforming is a bit challenging, I think because it's hard to tell where the player's feet are? Something to do with the FOV; I think increasing the FOV would go a long way here. To go along with this point, I also agree with other commenters that adding checkpoints within the level that you can "reset" to instantly would help a lot!