The art is really nice! The backstory is quite intriguing, and it's sad to see the game being so short, but I guess for a first game, this is already good enough. Keep up the good work!
Other things I like:
- Animated cutscenes
- A deep and sensitive story
Suggestions:
- It would be nice to have audio in the game. It just felt half as good and impactful right now
- I guess it would be to have more dialogue hinting at what really happened in the story